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TITLE: A cry for my people
By Marian Terry
01/06/13
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You still flow through me like the blood in my veins.. I thought I was dead but you turned my heart of stone to clay…your words are pouring out of me like a waterfall to the thirsty not sure why you chose me but let be what must be. To the haughty who reject your ways let them have it their way……to the confused make your light in me like a beacon pointing the drowning and shipwrecked of this world to YOU.. You are the One and only G!D and through the blood of Messiah redemption comes. Yes there is ONLY one way and most will shake their heads at me in dismay…How narrowed minded I am..well.. Yes the broad way that many choose is not for me I don’t flock together with what is so called relevant for this day in age I soar like an eagle staying faithful to your ways. All paths lead to you? How this must break You’re heart….Through Your word and your prophets you made is so clear that all religions don’t lead to YOU but what you have revealed as Truth from the very start, Isra’el where are you? Y’hudah why so far off? YOU are what Messiah bled and died for the Veil is torn no more covering and hiding sin….the final sacrifice was made..New creation A RELATIONSHIP begins But no…Your people are near a remnant there will always be!!!! For your covenant long ago YOU promised AS THE STARS IN THE SKY AND EVEN THE GRAINS OF SAND No human can number!!! From east to west…North to South Salvation Redemption a promise of Resurrection For ALL Nations who place their trust in Messiah….Yeshuah…Yeshuah….Yeshuah…all knees shall bow all tongues shall confess You are ALPHA You are OMEGA!!!! The beginning and the end….let ours voices in unison sing…to YESHUA OUR RISEN KING.
Marian 2012
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