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TRUST JESUS TODAY
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Daddy there's something I need to tell you and I hope you understand
I have learned many things now as I become a man
Several things once were trivial and I didn't know that much
But now what I would do for just your hands to touch
Daddy there's more that I would say if I should get the chance
I'd say that now I'm sorry that I seemed to miss the dance
And I would say daddy let’s play cards and checkers and such
I would say daddy you know I love you but do you know how much
Daddy I could talk with you forever I have so much to ask
What was your favorite color and your favorite class
Do you remember when I was younger and what it was like
I bet we had some fun then working on tools, toys and bikes
Daddy now that I'm much older a great deal has come to pass
I'll never forget that feeling when my heart broke in half
And that I went through the motions of day after day
I just could not face the feeling that I would never see your face
Oh but daddy now I know and take comfort in my faith
That through the grace of Jesus I will again see your face
We'll talk about the old days and set the story straight
It will not be much longer now and I can hardly wait
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