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TRUST JESUS TODAY
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I was out to sea deep under the surface of the ocean somewhere in the Pacific aboard SSN 666 when I wrote this 12/24/1978. She was my favorite Submarine despite the number she bore.
Twas the night before Christmas
And all through the boat
Not a sailor was stirring
As I wore my blue coat
Everyone sleeping
And dreaming of home
Their wives and their families
Were one less alone
Tomorrow Christmas dinner
Lots of pumpkin and pie
The cooks are all busy
Can you wonder why?
But the meaning of Christmas
Is not of Saint Nick
Not of his reindeer
Or the flick of his whip
Twas the birth of our precious Lord
And savior Jesus Christ
Who laid in a manger
Under that star, so bright
He came to teach
And save us our lives
He lived on earth thirtythree years
And left in a sigh
He said to his Father
Please forgive all
Then rose on the third day
Upon God’ Call
He lived as a man
To help us believe
Born of a virgin
He died for you and me
Filled with the Holy Spirit
Awaiting the end
Christ’ second coming
From graves will ascend
The Angels about him
In glory He’ll be
Coming for His children
To live in eternity
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