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TITLE: Wow!!
By Wesley Hesketh
03/04/12
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I'd like the readers to see that even though it seems so bleak, our Creator is always here. Even for the worst of us. Also we don't need flowery words to flatter Him. He truly loves you, the real you.
Father Iím dumbfounded
By the tolerance You show.
I thought Youíd started over
With all the things You know.

I know Iíve been created
By Your tender hands.
You gather me from the dust
You call my name as man.1

From the start I am a sinner
My will for good is weak.
I know You could stop it all
With just the words You speak.

But You have given me
A gift that is my own.
Even as I stumble Ďround
You will bring me home.

Surprisingly I find
Forgiveness constantly.
I canít seem to get it right
Yet Youíre always there for me.

The amazement that I feel
As I stand and shake my head.
For without Your tender mercy
I know that Iíd be dead.

I stand here confounded
At how You look at me.
By now Iíd given up
On this failure that I see.

You donít see this flaw
You see me whole and pure.
You help me walk a better walk
Cause thatís what friends are for.

1 Genesis 3:19 paraphrased
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