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TITLE: Evening News
By Connie K Cameron
02/13/12
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A poem about the news
When I pick up the paper
All the violence that I see
When I turn on the TV
That bad news is getting to me
Just can't escape it, no
Jesus said this is how it would be

We've got teenage parents
Doing drugs and drinking alcohol
Living off of welfare
Barely getting by at all
The Devil keeps lying
He's setting them up for a fall

And that evening news
Is singing the blues and the
Devil is roaming around
He's crusing the Earth
And he's giving birth to sin
And bringing people down
But we've read the book
And we're going to win
Cause we've got the victory
Over sin, in Jesus

I've been reading my bible
And I can't deny what I've read
I've been reading my bible
And I can't deny what I've read
You know the end is coming
The proof's around
It's all been said

The world is listening to
A new age of psychic lies
Calling dial a demon
Listening to some bad advice
And those fiery darts going to
Hit them right between the eyes

And that evening news
Is singing the blues and the
Devil is roaming around
He's crusing the Earth
And he's giving birth to sin
And bringing people down
We've read the book and
We're going to win
Cause we've got the victory
over sin, in Jesus
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