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TITLE: A Godly Man
By karen McLamb
06/22/05
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This dedicate to my Husband

I hope you'll like it.
That they admonish the young women to love their husbands, to love their children,
(Titus 2:4)

Having a beautiful husband that longs to do God’s will, Obeying God’s Word walking uprightly, in HIS love by being a brother? A father,
I enjoy when he shares the truth about his life, his family, and all”
I feel blessed by having a husband that does his best to please God as well as me.
I also noticed how he is reliable for the children, family, and friends and on the job. He is a living example of being a brother in CHRIST, faithful lover to me, a best friend to many…. As I speak about other people husband’s, my husband when I met him he was, a beautiful person. “I see him as more like a brother, in many situations As the Bible say let brotherly love continue. Believe me I certainly did let brotherly love into our lives; we still have our relationship, when we can talk about anything, our children grandchildren, everything in his life. I saw him so relaxed with all areas around our way of life.

When we met, he was a joy that entered not just my life, but also all our lives after waiting for ten years being a single parent. My children from a previous marriage now enjoy honestly know about his life, his family and all, differently as we rely on him for masculine strength we never knew before.

I took a risk, and with much advice that all of my friends wanted me to follow, unsure about truly having met a good man from chatting from the internet.
In addition, I told them that they must trust the God in me as I feel; I must follow this feeling in my heart. He is a good man, work very hard with the different type of gifts that God has given him, such as power washing buildings and houses, graffiti remover, labors all around parks, apartment building; I really enjoy watching him work.


He talks confidently about handling our finances, also helps me with, the grocery shopping, doing our laundry, cooking, all these things and much more that I could not thank God enough, for this sweet loving husband, that he has given me. My sister’s have asked me. Are you happy? In addition, the only reply I will ever say is. Yes, I ‘am very happy!
That is as far of allowance the family will be able to ask about my husband.
I will not say much about his talent except what I have just disclosed, so that they will love what they heard than to speculate. Therefore, what type of work he does for a living does not make him a man,
GOD did a good job of doing that for me, and those that know what he does for me.
I am telling them good advice to look for that is like giving away free money! Nevertheless, will they see it that way! I always say this or that; without letting, them know I will not disclose too much personal information. If I started doing that, they will be calling him up for everything using up all of our free time.

I will always say sweet words to him, give him little gifts, make him special cakes, and give him words of wisdom, encouragement, inspiration, and love each day as I breathe.
We keep each other going with kisses and hugs, there is not enough hugs or kisses in a day.
Most people would think were crazy, I get a good laugh at everyone who said it, Love his words; he will speak to me if the day is ruff,“God is with you my love he never leaves you nor forsakes you,”
I give these words to him time to time.
“To My Dear Husband”
You have a very special way
Of
Brightening up my everyday!
Of putting, love in all you do…
That is the reason I care for you.
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