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TITLE: The Answer?
By Wesley Hesketh
10/02/11
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Every time I say God forgot me, He reaches out and brings me home. even the great sinner i am.
Every time I think ahead
I fall so far behind.
I try to do it with my heart
But itís crowded by my mind.

Happily ever after
Is that a way to live?
I know in that I am a fool
I donít know how to give.

Yet Iím getting better
Iím reaching out to You.
All the lies fade away
Revealing all the truths.

I find that I defeat me
I donít believe I try
Trying to make me feel good
I'm covered with these lies.

I must change direction
And find another way.
I think Iíll find the answers
If I could only pray.

I wish I knew the answer
But Iím afraid to ask.
I have failed the test Lord
Because of my fallen past.

A mighty God stands smiling
At this frightened soul.
He reaches out and draws me
Back into His fold.

He gives me understanding
His touch cleared up my mind
How could I be so foolish?
Once dead but now Iím fine.
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