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TITLE: The Message
By Jill Free
09/05/11
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The audience is those whom are preaching,trying to convince a lost person, that knows nothing about the Lord, to use love instead of law to begin the relationship.
The Message
“You must have a relationship with him. He is very jealous and will not allow you to put your parents, children, or career before him. You are a worthless sinner anyway and will never be good enough to deserve what he has already done for you.

You don’t deserve his love, you deserve to die. You are a sinner and you must turn your life over to the Lord. You better fear him for he will cast you into a lake of fire. Give him your life. Pray to him about everything. Read his word. Bow down before him. Worship him. Fear him.

Become a new creature. Throw away the old person. Do not act the same as you have in the past. If you have any bad habits, drinking or smoking, quit immediately. Do not hang around friends that don’t believe.

Go to his house twice a week to gossip with others who confess to live this same lifestyle, and whatever you do, don’t miss or people will talk about you. Make this commitment now before it’s too late. If you die and you have not given your life to him, he will send you to hell and allow you to burn for eternity.“

“I am just an Ole Sinner” was the title of the message that day. Was that really what the preacher said? No, but that is what the lost heard and were not persuaded.

She finally gave in and tried God, condemnation swallowed her as she sat on the back row.

A girl desperate for help, tormented for years by her own mind, stepped out in search of love and found this message. Years of depression exhausted her; she could barely take a breath. Her spirit was heavy with bitterness, un-forgiveness, and hate. The people she hoped could help confirmed her guilt.

She walks away from church that day, “I know I am no good. I know I don’t deserve to be loved. Forgive, yeah right! I can’t do those things. Who wants to serve a mean ole god anyway? I don’t have to go to church for someone else to tell me how worthless I am. I know that! If I have to live like that to go to heaven with the saints, I will go on to hell with the sinners!”
Her life passed with years of open wounds festering on the inside of her. “Is this it? Is this what life is about? Why do we bother? She would ask herself these questions. There was a voice, “Give God another chance.”

She finds herself in the parking lot of a church, giving God another try. There is a desperate desire inside of her that has to know if God is real. As she musters up the courage to walk through the doors, the voice inside of her said, “It’s me and you, no one else.” Feet squared and head up, she pulls the door open.

“For God so loved the world, YOU, that He gave His one and only son that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life.
Jesus said,” Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, I will give you rest. Take my yoke upon you and learn from me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and you will find rest for your soul, for my yoke is easy and my burden is light.”

You are His child and He loves you for exactly who you are. He will give you peace. He will forgive you. He will take the mess you have made in your life and turn it into a message that will help others. He will heal your heart. He will wash away all your shame. He will cause to smile again. He will fill your life with more joy than you can ever imagine. He will celebrate your progress every step of the way, you do not have to take this journey alone.

He knows who you are, He created you. You are His child; He will never leave you nor forsake you. He loves you. Just ask Him and he will send His spirit to live on the inside of you. He will guide your every step.”

“Tell Them I Love Them” was the message that day and she was finally persuaded to give her heart to the Lord. She fell to her knees and cried out, “Jesus, I know you love me! Please forgive me!”
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