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TITLE: A Troop of Grays
By Catherine Maher
08/30/11
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This was written to honor the ladies I am in weekly Bible Study with. Each one is gray haired and wise in the Lord.
A TROOP OF GRAYS

Others see us
Old and gray
Pause
Hear what we say

Write the story
Wield the sword
Win battles
Name of the Lord

Accolades no
Hear no applause
Keep in
March for the cause

Trained our young
They grew
Watched them
Heard them

Lay hands
Saw recovery
Joy
Unequal

Dead raised
Prodigals returning
Job well done
His power burning


Within our heart
Hand in hand
Lifting banners
Throughout the land


Troop of Grays
Donít scratch or claw
Room in the Mansion
Place for all

Spot one
They travel
Troop of Grays
Hear them well

Marvelous
A wonder
Hair turned gray
Heart still gold

Revised by Cathy Maher, August 31, 2011
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