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TRUST JESUS TODAY
I've always been partial to creative writing, and my thoughts seem to be speaking lately in the form of poetry. I'm open to any critiquing/comments! This idea spoke to me as I sat quietly marveling at the way the Spirit has moved in my life in the past months and how the Holy Spirit tends to be forgotten at times.
I hold you tight, cradle you,
weave the threads of passion in her ever beating heart.
I guide you, breathing courage into the soul,
as she bends like a tree in the raging storm.
I whisper you, sweetly,
in the stillness of her day.
I beat you, like a drum,
into the empty spaces of her mind.
I give to her:
freely as the dream, daringly as the hope, calmly as the peace, vibrantly as the joy.
I plant you, a graceful garden,
rooting her deep inside where she can
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