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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This was written on the day the event was happening and is dedicated to those who lost love ones, family members and friends and most of all were children of Christ.
Who will wipe away my tears,
While for the love one I lost, I weep
Who will now help me rest so easy,
While at night I try to sleep
Who will embrace me ever so tightly
Or who can ever take your place,
Who will say my name the way you did
Placing a soft smile upon my face
Where are you now my sweet flower
When I need you most in life
Where is the sound of your joy and laughter
That always made my life be so right
For my eyes grow tired from weeping
And my knees are weak from prayer
And I cannot let go of what I lost
When you were taken away from here
For every time the door bell rings
Or the phone announces a call
I jump in expectation with a fervent hope
That from my life you did not fall
And yet still my mind grows weary
As I try once again to sleep
For I cannot let go, of the love I do miss
When images of you my heart always keeps
Until we meet again.
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