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TITLE: I Can See
By Michelle Massaro
06/06/10
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Please critique rythym and flow, as well as overall impact. Thank you so much!
I can see you weeping,
You don't realize that I'm there.
Watching from the shadows
In an unblinking stare.

I can hear you shouting,
Though I do not know the words.
They're frightening and confusing,
I'd rather not have heard.

I can see your scars,
Though you've hidden them quite well.
I know they are a secret
I'm not supposed to tell.

I can hear the footsteps
Coming down the hall
I know that Daddy hurts you-
Mama, I’ve seen it all.
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