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TITLE: Show Yourself
By A . WAL
11/24/09
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This song, I've been having a lot of trouble with. it's fine with the music, but it almost feels like it's two separate songs. I don't know how I'm going to sing this one at my church because it's kind of Jazzy and my church only allows old hymns or old hymn sounding songs. I don't know what I'm going to do. lol.
Show Yourself

First verse

Show Yourself, You've heard way to many times
Show Yourself, They say looking for a sign
Show Yourself, all the blind ones chime
Show Yourself to me.

Show Yourself, chants the mockers in the streets
Show Yourself, echoes from the mountain peaks
Show Yourself, all the foolish ones shriek
Show Yourself to me.

Among a wicked world of lies
their all looking for direction
when they look into my eyes
let them see Your own reflection

I want it to be Your replies
as I answer every question
let me make them all realize
that I am Your creation.

Chorus

So Lord don't Show Yourself to me
show Yourself, through me.

When I wrap my arms around them
let them feel Your love suround them

Lord show Yourself through me.

Second verse

Show Yourself, all the desperate cry
Show Yourself, says a beggar passing by
Show Yourself, Their hands reaching for the sky
Show Yourself to me.

Show Yourself, Lord their asking You
Show Yourself, their looking for the truth
Show Yourself, If only they knew
Show Yourself to me.

With every word that I speak
and every thought that I posess
They should know it's you I seak
and I'm not just like the rest.

When they know how much I care
it's from You they should assume
they should feel Your presence near
when I walk into a room.

Chorus again.
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