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TITLE: Simple Truth
By A . WAL
11/21/09
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A song I found a while back that I wrote when I was 15. When I wrote it I didn't get it, but now I do so I might as well put it on here. (I guess that's proof that God gives me the words I write) P.s, don't forget to put the chorus between every verse and after the last.
Simple Truth

Why is it so hard to say
Lord forgive me, I lost my way?
Why is it so easy to stray?

Why is it so hard today
to open the bible and to pray?
Why is it so easy to stray?

Chorus

Because it's hard to make things easy and
it's easy to make things hard
those rules apply to everyone
it doesn't matter who you are.

Though I find it all confusing
there's a truth that stays within
you'll always find God missing
when you're trying to hide from him.

second verse

Why is it so hard for you
go out in the world speak what's true?
why is it so easy not to?

Why is it so hard to do
listen to the sermen sit in the pew?
Why is it so easy not to?


third verse

Why is it so hard to make
a real promise and not fake?
why is it so easy to break?

why is it so hard to take
His law to heart and not forsake?
Why is it so easy to break?


Final verse

Why is it so hard to date
when a time of forgiveness was your state?
why is it so easy to hate?

Why is it so hard to wait
on God's time? He's not late.
Why is He so Easy to hate?
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