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TITLE: OH LORD
By Jide Oboise
11/08/09
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A prayer from the heart, following the format of THE LORD'S PRAYER
OUR FATHER WHO HATH IN HEAVEN
Oh Lord, the great and mighty one who sits in the heavens with this earth making as His giant footstool and roams in His free spirit



HALLOWED BE THY NAME
I raise your name this day
Above all others and declare your majesty in my life through all the Earth


THY KINGDOM COME
Let your soon to come Kingdom include me as I walk with and work for you day-by-day



THY WILL BE DONE ON EARTH AS IT IS IN HEAVEN
Oh Lord, let your will not mine be done as I take each step and pursue my life and the goals that are set



GIVE US THIS DAY OUR DAILY BREAD
Oh Lord, I pray this day for your provisions in various aspects of life, spiritually, physically, intellectually, socially and as I go out to work for daily bread, let not that bread be a snare to my doom and perish



FORGIVE US OUR TRESPASSES
Oh Lord, Please forgive me of all sins of omission and commission
The weakness that my flesh enjoys and my character condones
Those things that make you shed a tear because of me


AS WE FORGIVE THOSE WHO TRESPASS AGAINST US
Help me to forgive that one that continually taunts me and push me to anger
Take away all unforgiveness from my heart to be able to receive mercy from you oh Lord


LEAD US NOT INTO TEMPTATION
Oh Lord, let nothing separate me from your love. I will overcome every opposition and temptation in your might and strength. Rom.8:31-39




BUT DELIVER US FROM EVIL
Oh Lord, hear my prayer this day
As I come before you in humility and a broken spirit
Let me not watch in hopeless ache as the desires of my enemies come true in my life
But turn every evil counsel of my enemies around for my good, let what has been planned for evil in my life be turned around for good and instead of shame I receive double portion of blessings.



THINE IS THE KINGDOM
For your Kingdom is sure and grounded
about this is no controversy


THE POWER AND THE GLORY
I receive from you the power to conquer and to push forth
The Glory to excel as I have been destined



FOREVER AND EVER
From this day onwards, day after day, month after month, year after year world without end


AMEN
And so shall it be in Jesus name!
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