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TITLE: They say wisdom comes with age...
By Nikki Heerschap
10/07/09
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I had a lot of trouble putting this one together...am still not sure if it flows right. Hopefully it gets the message across though.
Little one reaches
‘Don’t touch’ mum says
Child doesn’t understand
Yet Obeys

Years pass
Children grow
Life problems
Knowledge sow

Teenager wants
‘Don’t do’ mum says
Teen knows best
Disobeys

One choice
Leaves Strife
Half knowledge
Decoys advice

Years pass
Teens grow
Life experiences
Understanding sow

Mother scolds
Child pleads “listen”
Mum punishes
Uncommitted sin

Little one hurt
By understanding too set
Deafness blamed
Lasting regret

Mother, teen
Lack what be
In the child
Truth can see

Wisdom accepts
Doesn’t know best
Hears advice
When it knows less

Life teaches
Knowledge, understanding
But wisdom alone
Gives discerning
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