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TITLE: Call On Me
By Nadine Riggs
09/22/09
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This is a piece I wrote after losing a very strong Christian friend to cancer. The thing that impressed me about him was that although he was dying he still continued to take time to pray for others needs as well.
When you are tired and can walk no more call on Me, for I will carry you to Heavens door. You do not have to struggle, or crawl upon the floor as I will never leave your side, just call and I will be there.

When you are in pain, or fighting for your last breath, remember you do not have to go on alone for that is why God sent Me to you, just call and I will help ease your pain, and end your struggle to breathe.

Your life upon this planet is not meant to be eternal for your body is but flesh and bone, it is meant to return to the earth from whence it came; but your soul is eternal and I will show you the way to the narrow entrance where you shall find eternal rest.

In My Fatherís dwelling place called heaven your soul will learn the meaning of eternal love, joy and peace, you will have to struggle no more as the Father is waiting for you with open arms, just call out My name, and I will be there.

You only have to call on Me and I will guide you to your Father, and you will hurt no more. Your struggle is almost over now all you have to do is call on Me, and I will help you leave this world so full of pain and strife.

Your battle is over now it is time for you to reach out your hand and grab onto Mine, and I will guide you to the other side. Just call out to Me, and I will be there for You to comfort you, and care for you until you reach eternal peace.

Your family will be fine my child for I will fill their hearts with peace, they will mourn your loss of course, but I will comfort them and remind them that for you the battle now is over and they will see you not again until I guide them home to the Father, when their time has come to an end.

But, for now they shall remain behind until the day when you will all meet again on the other side of Heavenís gate. Just close your eyes and reach out your hand for Me for you have been cleansed by the Sacrificial lamb..

Your time here is now finished and the Father awaits your arrival with loving, open arms; you only have too reach for Me and I will take you to your Father; God, and your struggle will be over just reach out and take My hand.

Now you are ready to begin a new adventure your pain and strife will be left behind upon this earth with your frail body, for you will now be given one that is more glorious than you could ever imagine.

Your new body will not feel pain, or gasp for air as it is a glorious body that will never again know the pain of death. Just reach out to Me and I will guide you into eternity.

I am now, and always will be Your Savior, Jesus Christ. Come with me for My love will heal you and you will remember no more the pain and strife of this world. My Father is anxiously awaiting your arrival, please come with me into time without end.
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