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TITLE: Empty Promises
By Angie Diaz-Cervo
08/14/09
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Nevaeh was barred from her children, her home and her place of business. Thursday night she went to dinner with her girlfriend which she hasn't spent times with in a long times ever since Olivier quit financial services. She got home at ten thirty at night, the police car put their headlight and she wondering what was going on. Two police officers approached her and asked are you Nevaeh and she answered yes and they said that they have a restraining order for her from her spouse Olivier. She signed the paper and read it and went in the house to call her brother James which live in Texas. She could not believed that her spouse went that far, but she wasn't surprise since she heard the stuffs that he said to his own blood son because he didn't want to run the branch in New York anymore. That was going to disturbed his plan and changed his routine. A few minutes later the same police officers show up at the house and told her that she had to vacated the house because Olivier was going to stayed at the house with their son Antonio. They told her to pack her stuffs and leave the house. She was great at packing, therefore she took as much as she can . The last time she left the house for two weeks and stayed at her sister in Orange, he had Gaspar came and help him thrown her personal stuffs out.

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