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TITLE: Dead Bird
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08/06/09
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I saw dead bird, squashed on the pavement. So i wrote about what i saw.
I'm thinking about re-arranging everything in this poem and trying to figure out if it will flow more in a different order.

Thanks guys!
Dead Bird

Little robin
Ready for take off
Lands in the street.
A fast car driving bye.
Now all smooshed down
in the trodden pavement.
Once to be something that flies
And soars
Now lies dead.
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