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TITLE: Piece of Clay
By Joel Grissett
07/28/09
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This is a song inspired by a passage in the Book of Jeremiah, Chapter 18. I'am currently working on the guitar chord progressions for this song.
Your honest critique would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Verse 1:

I was on the road to nowhere, no purpose within me. (Within me)
Never really believing that anyone cared for me. (Cared for me)
Then I heard the story about Jesus, and how that He loved me. (He loved me)
And that He wanted to save me, and make something out of me. (Oh)

Chorus 1:

Now I知 just a piece of clay in the hands of the Master. (The Master)
Being molded and shaped into just what He wants me to be. (Wants me to be)
Yes I知 just a piece of clay in the hands of the Master. (The Master)
Well I知 not much yet, but one day you just wait and see.

Verse 2:

My friend, are you searching for purpose within you? (Within you)
Are you haunted by thoughts that nobody cares for you? (Cares for you)
Then let me tell you all about Jesus, and how that He loves you. (He loves you)
And how He wants to save you, and give you a life brand new. (Oh)

Chorus 2:

Then you値l be a piece of clay in the hands of the Master. (The Master)
Being molded and shaped into just what He wants you to be. (Wants you to be)
Yes you値l be that piece of clay in the hands of the Master. (The Master)
You may be not much yet, but one day you just wait and see.

Ending:

Yes we池e not much yet, but one day you just wait and see.
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