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TITLE: Knock Knock
By Yvonne Osborne
07/05/09
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Knock Knock.

Knock, knock,
Who's there?
Satan.
I'm here to take you today,
I'll show you an easier way,
A wider road, you can run free
Come on now bow down to me.
I'm waiting.

Knock, knock,
Who’s there?
Satan.
No-one will know you wear my mark
We'll steal and kill, hide in the dark.
Come on your secret is safe with me
The world is mine, come and see.
Take my hand.

Knock, knock,
Who’s there?
Jesus.
I heard you cry in the night,
Too weak to take up the fight,
My love for you will overcome
And deliver from the Evil One,
I'm waiting.

Knock, knock,
Who’s there?
Jesus.
In me the living waters flow
And I shall never let you go,
I shall lead you into rest
You are my dearest, nothing less,
Take my hand.


Knock, knock,
Who's there?
Me.
I went into the world and saw
Satan's lies were nothing more,
Jesus came, my heart now sings,
I'm in the shadow of His wings,
You can come too.
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