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TITLE: At The Foot Of The Cross
By Nikki Heerschap
07/04/09
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This was inspired by Matthew 11v28: "Come to me all you who labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest."
Have not yet written a chorus and am terribly stuck on what to write...any feedback/comments would be greatly appreciated :)
V1:
Lay down your sorrows, let go of the pain
At the foot of the cross where Jesus was slain
At the foot of the cross, look up into His eyes
Deep within them lies a love that never dies

V2:
Lay down your anger, let go of the blame
At the foot of the cross, He's calling your name
At the foot of the cross, His spirit cries "come"
He loves you as his son, you are his favourite one

V3:
Lay down your worries, let go of the stress
At the foot of the cross, Jesus gives rest
At the foot of the cross, recieve His peace
That all your inner storms may cease
He died that you might be released

V4:
At the foot of the cross
Is victory
At the feet of Jesus
We are free x2
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