Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Read What's New Join
Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
THE CRITIQUE CIRCLE

BACK TO
CRITIQUE CIRCLE

INSTRUCTIONS
COMPLETE
INSTRUCTIONS HERE

CRITIQUE GUIDELINES

CRITIQUE TIPS

HELP TOUR

It's easy to critique the works of others and get your work critiqued. Just follow the steps below:

1) Post your first piece.

2) You must then critique the work of another member to post another piece yourself.

3) For each critique you give, you earn 1 credit that can be used to post another one of your writings.

4) You can build up credits to be used at another time by giving critiques to others.
Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST





TITLE: Just One Flea
By Mary Lou Tiner
06/25/09
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND

My target audience is older children.
Thanks for critiquing this for me! I appreciate all suggestions.
Just one flea

“You can’t see me!” said the tiny flea
“Shouldn’t matter to you, what I choose to do!”
So the flea bit and gnawed till the old hound saw’d
There was something on his back!

“Well, I’ll be bound!” said the grumpy hound
“Since my master’s away, I can itch all day.”
So he scratched and he chewed till a hair pile grew
And covered the play room floor.

“Now where’s my toy?” said the lazy boy.
“Didn’t put it away, when I played today.”
So he kicked and he threw till the hair pile flew
Out the window with the toy.

The toy and hair, sailing through the air
Couldn’t help where it blew, when it blocked the view
Of the man in the car who couldn’t see far
So he ran into a tree...

All because of one flea!
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
YOUR CREDITS

LOGIN HERE