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TITLE: Lone Star
By Darren Cole
06/23/09
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This came to me after reading a listening to all the trouble that is going on around us. I felt like the secratary as the Lord spoke to my spirit. I enjoyed writing this and sharing it like no other poem I have written. enjoy and comment please.
The lone star in the darkest of night
shines bright

The nation has forgotten who they are
For we are merely just the morning star
Not the sun by far

As darkness seems to last so long
The morning star shines and the darkness soon will be gone

Wait for it, Watch for it, Long for it
Don’t start to wonder “where is it?”

When Christ was born the star was there
Reflecting his majesty into the nights air

Three kings traded for one
He comes again to see what we have done

The light of his countenance will burn brighter on our faces as he approaches
To all who burn brightest at night ¡Buenos notches’!

Ride it out for darkness will turn to dawn
You are the only light left, shine or all will be gone

Hold fast as the day nears
No more darkness no more tears

His power, Our resurrection, is not far
Stand fast, for you are the lone star
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