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TITLE: A VISIT TO THE WHITEHOUSE, or WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS PICTURE?
By Verna Mull
06/22/09
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It seems to me there is so little respect in God's House today. Do you agree, or disagree? I'd like your imput on the poem itself, but also on the message it carries. Our God is an Awesome God. He is also the Great Judge.
Were going to the Whitehouse!
I surely need a new dress.
In case I meet the President,
I want to look my very best!

No he didnt get my ballot vote,
But, hes the President of our Nation.
I really owe him my respect;
Because of his special station.

A couple days from today,
Were going to find a church.
Just cause Im in Washington,
I cant leave Jesus in the lurch!

Of course I am away from home.
No one will care just how I dress.
I may wear jeans or even shorts.
Wholl care if I look a mess?

And then, I think for a moment,
God is the King of this Universe!
When it was just a President,
I almost had to rehearse!

How could I have viewed my Savior,
Not worthy of my very best?
He gave His very life for me!
How did I expect to be blessed?

I know Hes interested in my heart,
But, what do my thoughts really say?
He is the One Im worshipping,
And Id forgotten that today.

Dear Lord, forgive my disrespect.
Thank-you for convicting my heart.
May I never take you for granted,
Nor from this conviction, depart.

No, I dont care what others think,
Nor even what they seem to do.
But as for me, and my household,
Well continue to honor You!
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