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TITLE: Painful Observations
By Laura Manley
06/19/09
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Painful Observations is about a mother's suffering as she watches her child or children going through difficulties.
My heart spills tears
for things I cannot change-
I am an observer
with watchful eyes
on two people
in the throes
of their own pain.

Love does not surface
in the depths of these waters.

I want to suture
their deep-seated wounds,
massage their aching hearts;
yet, am able only to watch
as they seek their own remedy.

I am a mother.
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