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TITLE: Oxygen
By Samuel Connelly
06/12/09
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Another poem for my wife, I am adding to the book. Would love your feedback
Breath escapes my lips
and my lungs give up its life
when you appear, like a
wondrous character from
deep in my oceanic psyche-
my fantastic slumber-
land country

You are always there
and yet breathing has
not gotten easier with
time. Expelling oxygen
and reminding myself
to inhale is my current
mental exercise.

One can not live without
the next breath; you
keep me living on the
edge of existence. I
keep me living, to stay
on that edge, where I
camp in a twilight of my
awe of you.

I would ask you to
help me find my next
breath, but I am
frozen in a moment.
You are my country
of oxygen, "Breathe,
breathe" I say to my-
self.
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