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TITLE: The Fever
By Samuel Connelly
06/12/09
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I am expanding my collection of love poems for my wife, and will publish the collection in a book called 'The Chronicles of a Lover', this is one of the most recent poems.
I am sick with the sickness of lovers.
When I applied a wet rag to my heart it
sizzled. It is passion, I feel.


My breath is hot
My eyes are glassy
My lips are chapped


In daring to look into the mirror
I see the symptoms all over my
face. It is the fever.


My throat is dry
My heart beats ravenously
My body sweats


You are the cause of my
condition, my beautiful pain,
my hurting, lovely, pleasure


My tongue is swollen
My head pounds
My mouth will not stop smiling


It is the fever
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