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TRUST JESUS TODAY
I wrote this to enclose in a wedding card for very dear friends whose marriage is coming up soon. Plese critique this and let me know what I can do to make it as special as I would like it to be. Please be honest. I have thick skin!
Lord, lead this couple today,
Down the path that’s just begun.
Keep their eyes upon the Pattern,
Your One, and most Holy Son.
May their lives be filled with joy,
Through every step of their life.
When trials come their way,
Draw to You, avoiding strife!
Fill their lives with your Presence,
Which will radiate to all.
May they lead many others
To answer, Your loving call!
And,may you send them children,
To bless, and to cheer their home;
Give them wisdom, and deep love,
So that they will never roam.
Keep their lives very fruitful,
In everything, that they do.
May they honor and cherish,
In real submission to You.
May they reach their “golden years”
Abounding in Your great love,
A love that has grown deeper
‘Till they meet with You above!
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