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TITLE: Fill Me With Thy Flame
By Joel Grissett
05/28/09
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This is a poem that I wrote soon after I began preaching. It is in the flyleaf of my Bible, and I read it as a prayer each time I preach.
Your honest critique as to subject, structure and style would be greatly appreciated.
I stand before the anxious crowd
Assembled now to hear,
A message from your servant Lord
Oh why such dreadful fear?

It’s that I am but mortal flesh
A weak and helpless thing,
And only by Your Spirit’s power
This message I dare bring.

So as I pause and pray dear God
Don’t let me speak in vain,
But give me words of fire to preach
And fill me with Thy flame.
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