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TITLE: Fly Away Blue Bird
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05/08/09
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(ugh) i hate this poem already. im disgusted just looking at it. (Sounds just like therapy to me. ew.) anyway...other than the fact that im frustrated with how this turned out, I might rewrite later or something...
the idea for this poem has been in my head for at least 3 months....i wanted it sound better than what it turned out. perhaps i waited too long? but tell me what you think of it, grammar, errors, ect.
Fly Away Blue Bird



Fly away blue bird.
Fly away blue bird.
Chase the wind in the trees
And feel the sky
beneath your wings
Chase away the nightmares and
Bring about the apple bees.
Fly away blue bird
Hoister me upright, caress my soul
and heighten these low spirits.
Fly away blue bird
Ventilation roars like a whisper
Closed inside a window
without any blinds.
These solid stone ears
Hear the deaf cry.
Fly away blue bird
when the winds shift gears
And the torrents that swindle
Your fretful mind
Change the direction
In which you fly.
Fly away blue bird
The darkest of dawns
Will threaten your voyage,
hilarity in which it devours
you aggressively;
leaves you empty.
Fly away blue bird.
Fly away blue bird.
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