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TITLE: The Lost
By
04/07/09
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Remember when you were lost in your sin? God truly brings meaning, light, and hope to your life when you invite Him into your heart.
Constantly falling,
I am not free,
Don't know where I'm going,
For I cannot see.

There's more than just me,
In my desperate crowd,
I'll soon need an answer,
For the call of death is quite loud.

My condition is awful,
It's sure getting worse,
Hurry I must,
For I've had it since birth.

Is there a watchmen,
Looking out on the wall,
Someone to help me,
From my tragic fall.

Someone to point me,
Away from my strife,
Onto the right Path,
That leads to Life.

Generations and generations,
Of nations hae been,
Trapped in the death trap,
That snare that's called sin.

Will more and more,
Continue to fall,
Refusing to listen,
To God's gentle Call.

But instead listen to,
The philosophies around,
Futile and aimless,
Just empty sound.

They must listen,
To the Truth of the Word,
The words of Christ Jesus,
Must now be heard.

The clock is now ticking,
The Christians go out,
Preach to all who will listen,
Before the angels shall shout.

For once you were falling,
You were not free,
Didn't know where you'd gone,
For you couldn't see.

Don't leave them slipping,
Into the pit of despair,
Tell all God loves them,
No time should you spare.
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