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TITLE: Marry Me Anyone?
By Teresa Trotter
08/13/08
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I need to get away!!! I have been through too much over the last 2 1/2 years! I want to go to Florida, Hawaii and Venice, Italy! I want to have a 3 month vacation! Spend one month in each place! I need some fun time, laughs and lots of cash for spending!

Of course you will need to have some extra cash, stashed some place! Please don't go into debt over me! I'm feeling guilty enough over stuff already! But if you got the extra dough!!! I'm ready to roll!!! My bags are packed!!! I want some sunshine!!! The sandy beaches and salt air!!!

We can have our marriage annulled once the 3 months are up! It's a perfect arrangement! Don't you think???

Hmmm... By the way... There's one catch! I really want to go alone! I want to go sightseeing by myself. You can come along if you must, as long as we stay in separate rooms and take separate tours. I just need your money. Not to use you or anything like that! Oh no!!! I would never do that!!! I would pay you back as soon as I won the lottery!!! I promise!!! I would!!! Really I would!!! Well... I think I would??? At least I'd hope I would...

I just need to get away and strangers won't just give you a vacation. So I figured... If you would marry me for 3 months. Then your money, would be my money and I wouldn't have to feel guilty, asking you for any!!! Because it would be mine too!!! Right???

Anyway... I'm ready for takers! Just leave your business card and I will check out your credentials and get back to you! I promise! Really... I will...





P.S. - Just in case some of you think that I am a couple of slices short of a sandwich. Well...in some ways I am. I was just kidding about the marriage. I needed to blow off some steam and get creative! Even though... I really wouldn't mind going on a vacation. I haven't been on one in a while.
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