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TITLE: Madonna Gently Weeps
By bo Jennings
11/22/13
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This was written for a dear friend who had suffered from a traumatic experience.
It was written for her in hopes that it would strengthen and lift her to her place of rightful warfare.

It is not a poem written with perfection in mind, but that a message of power and encouragement would be gained.

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Madonna,  you stand there. Lost and forlorn.


Frightened again. The Forest of Fears gnawing


eating, biting your soul.


It tries sucking life from you.


Remember the laws


It consumes only the willing.


Foreboding and Trembling it's children.


The playground bullies


But, you Madonna hold magic


With your spoken words


Manifesting freedoms from Fear


Calling on the God of the World.


Reminding God above


That no weapon formed against you will prosper


No earthly king will win.


Triumphant over bad company you will be


So simple is faith for war


Forgettable are weapons of warfare


But, Fear gained access to our mind


Grabbing strong the reigns again


Taking charge as planned


Making your horses follow your intended path


Thanking the Lord above


Place guilt and accusations behind


Wearing the crown of forgiveness instead


For HE has the way for all men


We pocess belief for the day.


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