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TITLE: The Land of What If
By Rick Musick
09/06/12
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We can not dwell in the Land of what if? We must land in the land of reality.
The Land of ‘What If’’ ?


We can’t dwell in the land of ‘what if’.
Because we live in the land of ‘what is’.
‘What if’ is a land of mystery
Filled with questions that
Will never be answered.

‘What if’ this didn’t happen?
‘What if’ I had not made that decision?
‘What if’ I was a better person?
‘What if’ I had done this,
‘What if’ I had done that?
‘What if’ this and ‘what if’ that?

We can not reside in our minds
In the land of ‘what if’.
We do not live there.
We live in the reality of, ‘what is’.

We must ’live’ in reality,
What are we doing with ‘What is’?
Are we building?
Are we dreaming?
Are we planning?
Are we loving?

I hope you and I learned a lot
In the land of ‘what if’.
That we apply the knowledge of yesterday
To the wisdom we need today.

Because ‘reality’ is, what ‘reality is.’
Reality is fact.
What we do with reality is going to determine our future.
I choose to move my mind, my heart, my dreams, my hopes, my love, my faith, to ‘what is’.
I choose to make the best of, ‘what is’.


Rick J. Musick
Tuesday March 27, 2012 6:21 a.m.
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