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TITLE: Sub Sailors Christmas
By Louis Nyecki Sr
04/17/12
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I was out to sea deep under the surface of the ocean somewhere in the Pacific aboard SSN 666 when I wrote this 12/24/1978. She was my favorite Submarine despite the number she bore.
Twas the night before Christmas
and all through the boat
Not a sailor was stirring,
as I wore my blue coat

Everyone sleeping
and dreaming of home
Their wives and their families,
were one less alone

Tomorrow Christmas dinner,
lots of goodies and pie
The cooks are all busy,
can you wonder why?

But the meaning of Christmas,
is not of Saint Nick
Not of his reindeer,
or the flick of his whip

Twas the birth of our precious Lord
and savior Jesus Christ
Who laid in a manger,
under that star, so bright

He came to teach
and save us our lives
He lived on earth thirty three years,
and left in a sigh

He said to his Father,
please forgive all
Then rose on the third day,
upon Godí Call

He lived as a man,
to help us believe
Born of a virgin,
He died for you and me

Filled with the Holy Spirit,
awaiting the end
Christí second coming,
from graves will ascend

The Angels about him,
in glory Heíll be
Coming for His children,
to live in eternity
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