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TITLE: Donovan's Blessings 10/17/12
By Sharon Cooper
10/17/12
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As Donovan finished supper, he looked toward the window and noticed it was getting dark. It was time to light the kerosene lamp.

ďMy how the day passes so quick,Ē he thought to himself.

ďThe days are getting shorter. Itíll soon be winter. Seems like only yesterday Maddie and I had just gotten married and moved into this one room cabin. And now our children have families of their own. My sweet Maddie is with the Lord now. It wonít be long before Iíll go home to be with my Lord. My, how he has blessed me through the years. Though this cabin is still small, it does have 2 bedrooms and a kitchen now. I built the kitchen for Maddie. She said she wanted a separate room where she could cook. Never could deny Maddie. Whatever she wanted, I tried to get for her. There were times though when there just wasnít enough money to spoil her the way I wanted.

We always had food to eat, though there wasnít always a lot left over. I was able to grow some vegetables. I still plant a little garden, but it get harder each year with my advancing age and failing health. We didnít have the best clothes, but Maddie and the children never complained. The children went to school and made fine adults. I sure am proud of them.

The boy Buster is the sheriff in town. He and his wife Molly donít live very far away. My daughter Mary and her husband Dalton donít live very far either. Mary and Molly comes to see me. They make sure Iím well and take medicine. Never have liked to take medicine, but the Doctor says I need some for my heart. I know Molly and Mary mean well, so I just let them have their say. Dalton and Buster have come over to make some repairs to the house. Used to I could do all those repairs, but it seems with my heart and all, Iím just not able to do the repairs for myself.

It is such a joy to see the grandkids. Mary and Dalton wants me to live with them. I donít think Iíll do that. Theyíre busy raising their own family. Buster and Molly says that I need someone to look after me. Theyíve been after me to move in with them too. But like I said before, they also have a family to raise. The kids donít need an old man under foot all the time too. Maddie was here when she died, and Iíll be here when I go to be with the Lord.

Well, Iíd better go to bed. Donít want to waste the kerosene. Have a lot to do tomorrow. Need to go to town and pick up a few things. Maybe Iíll stop by and see the grandkids. Should make it home by dark. Good night, sweet Maddie.
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