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TITLE: To Here From There 4-17-14
By Tonja Taylor
04/27/14
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I wrote this during a very difficult time in May of 2009. This song will be slow, and start out in a minor key, then change to a major key at least by the second chorus (10 lines). I also picture the CD cover or art showing a map of the journey, with the words, “You are here" and perhaps a voice saying "You are here" in a whisper at the beginning of the song.
)What do you think? I plan to put piano with this, perhaps direct from a keyboard, and maybe a flute or other instrument, in Garage Band. Thanks!
To Here From There

5/13/09 by Tonja Rayburn Taylor



Too weary to even care
I slept, You held me
You Who never slumber

You tore through the thorns
Of my anger and pain
And kissed me gently to life again

My dragon Slayer
My ultimate Hero
You’ve never let go
Wouldn’t let me die

You carried my broken soul
And nursed me back to health
Lovingly cleansed my cross-wired brain
Taught my heart to hope again

(chorus)
But I let go
And let You
To teach me to laugh
To help me cry

Amazing Grace!
Through every snare
You’ve proved Your Love
How much You care!

You've brought me healed
To here from there.

Favor and mercy unparalleled
Taking me down Your paths of light
Urging me to jump
So You can help me fly

My dragon Slayer
My Prince of Life
You’ve never let go
Wouldn’t let me die

But I let go
And let You
To teach me to laugh
To help me cry

Amazing Grace!
Through every snare
You’ve proved Your Love
How much You care

You've brought me healed
To here from there
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