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TITLE: I Look to You
By Ennis Smith
06/25/12
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My first attempt at song writing and melody. I'm posting a rough draft of the song on my Youtube channel, "TheEnn1973". Feel free to take a listen. Thank you for your critiques.
Verse 1
When darkness fills the night,
(darkness fills the night)

And I find myself alone
(find myself alone)

Searching for the light,
(looking for whatís right)

Searching for my home


Chorus
(I look to you),
for strength to help me find your way
(I look to you),
to guide me through another day
I look to you

Verse 2
When dangers crowd the skies
(I donít know why)

And Iíve done everything I can
(Iím only human)

Victimized by Satanís lies
(please hears my cries)

Iím leaning toward your plan
(please take my hand)

Chorus
(I look to you),
for strength to help me find your way
(I look to you),
to guide me through another day
(I look to you),
for strength to help me find your way
(I look to you),
to guide me through another day
I look to you
I look to you


Bridge
I look to you, when my strength is gone
I look to you when I doubt,
You are the rock that my faith rests on
I look to you

I look to you, when my strength is gone
I look to you when I doubt,
You are the rock that my faith rests on
I look to you


Chorus
(I look to you),
for strength to help me find your way

(I look to you),
to guide me through another day

(I look to you),
for strength to help me find your way

(I look to you),
to guide me through another day

(I worship you),
I bend my knees and humbly pray

(I sing for you),
I lift my voice and bravely say

(I cling to you),
through you Iím ready, come what may

(I am with you),
Jesus the truth, the life, and the way


Outro
I look to you
I look to you
I look to you
Jesus, I look to you
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