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TRUST JESUS TODAY
I wrote this one a while ago...but it's for all the beautiful girls out there who haven't found out just how special they really are!
She slams the door behind her and runs off down the road
The tears flowing down her face is her weakness sheís been told
She looks around to see if even one will glance her way
Why is she invisible on a clear and sunny day?
She doesnít look like all the others a sense of purity defined
She has a smile like her mother but itís soon to fade in time
So she prays to her God and she stays true to her heart
Still whyís everything so hard?
Amidst the scars and bruises and a shattered broken heart
She finds a little love and some forgiveness on her part
Still she finds it hard to give herself away
And now she hesitates when someone looks her way
One day walking down the road she sees a little girl
Tiny thin and fragile with a teardrop by her curls
She stoops down to hug her and says ďItís okayĒ
And the girl looks at her and says ďI see you todayĒ
But you donít look like all the others a sense of purity defined
You have a smile like my mother thatís sure to last all through time
And just pray to your God and just stay true to your heart
Cause not everythingís that hard
Now a fine young woman, she makes sure to stop and pray
For all the other girls who are invisible today
She stoops down to tell them just reach out in love
Itíll never fail you; youíll get blessings from above
Cause He didnít make you like the others a sense of purity defined
You have a smile like your mother thatís sure to last you through time
And just pray to our God and just stay true to your heart
And not everythingís that hard
Cause He didnít make you like the others
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