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TITLE: Da Truth
By Jacob Gibson
11/06/09
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Well I'm going to take a short break from my weird new story to let inspiration take over. A Christian rock song about... what else? One could call this my answer to Green Day. This will likely be controversial to some people but maybe it's worth thinking about. I've had enough of only hearing from one side. If you have any questions and opinions about anything I would be glad to hear them. (As long as people are open-minded to anything, I'm happy) Another song with misspelled words. :) Thank you!
1. Oh mainstream media please tell me what you want me to hear
With your opinions and surveys slanted 85 degrees
I don't need facts I just want to learn all about
Your sterotypes, and worldview that's bologna and cheese

Because global warming is our fault and we can't argue about it*
Because the crazy Christians and conservatives don't understand
Because we only show you what we want you to see and leave out the rest
Because we're not biased we just know it all, let us give you a hand

(Chorus)
Da truth, da truth is gonna set us free
Da truth, da truth will pull us from the debris
It's too hot to handle when it turns up the heat
Can make you ya sweat like crazy and squirm in your seat

Da truth, da truth is bigger than you realize
Da truth, da truth can be a shocking surprise
It's often too complex for any bumper sticker
It's just as vital to us all as your body's ticker

2. Oh public education please tell me what you know is true
The experts are always right so don't doubt what they have to say
If your parents disagree they're simply just too old-fashioned
This is the age of reason and common sense won't get you an A

Because there's no right and wrong, all of it is relative
Because evolution is a fact and any other theory's a lie
Because we can't have conflicting viewpoints, that would just confuse
Because sex before marriage is fine, you should give it a try

(Chorus)

(Bridge) I won't keep silent while we lose our freedoms
I won't sit still while people suffer
Everyone must hear the gospel and know
What's really going on here

Political correctness will be the death of us all
If we're too afraid to say what needs to be said
If they think they're gonna shut us up they're totally wrong
We have a right to question everything no matter who gets upset

Can you handle it?
Can you handle it?
Can you handle it?
Can you handle it?

I don't think so.
I don't think so.
I don't think so.
I DON'T THINK SO!

(Chorus)

*spoken* What... is... truth?

(alternate verse idea)
3. Oh father of lies please tell me what I want to hear
How God is wrong and holds us back from having fun
I can be like God if I'll just do what you say
I can have the whole world as my soul comes undone

Because I can do whatever I want with no worries of consequences
Because the Bible isn't true and there's only the here and now
Because following Christ is much too boring and difficult
Because I'm worth nothing at all, I'm afraid I must avow

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*This isn't my opinion, this actually happened. When Al Gore gave a speech and then let people ask questions, one man asked him about the possible scientific errors in An Inconvenient Truth and in reply he dodged the question. When the man tried again to ask his mike was shut off. I've also heard about global warming researchers using equipment in very hot places to get the results they want and other similar rumors. But don't take my word for it, check it out for yourself. I don't want people to be deceived and taken advantage of, and that's why I brought it up. And because I'm paranoid. :)
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