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Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
(Sung to the tune of the Banana Boat Song)
Oh no, Oh no o-o-o-o-oh,
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Sit all day till the mornin done
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Preachin man preach till the kingdom come
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Come Preachin man we all goin bananas
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Come Preachin man we all goin bananas
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Oh no, Oh no o-o-o-o-oh,
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Come nine clock, ten clock almost brunch
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Preachin man preachin and me got a hunch
He already ate and don’t wanna eat some
Oh no, Oh no o-o-o-o-oh,
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Come Preachin man we all goin bananas
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Come Preachin man we all goin bananas
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
I see deadly black tarantula
Lunchtime come and me wanna go home
Look like me found my lunch substantula
Lunchtime gone and no need to go home
Oh no, Oh no o-o-o-o-oh,
Lunch come up and me need go home now
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