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This is a political parody. I hope everyone reading this understands the symbolism I'm trying to bring forth with the word "change."
Person1:(walks up to the box) “Finally it's here, the Oh Box O' Change. Everyone says we need tons of change to get through these times. I don't know why exactly we need change, but it sounds good to me.(Counts out the money) Let's see that's twenty dollars for change.”(inserts the money in the slot.)
Oh Box O' Change: “You have inserted twenty dollars. Your change is five cents.”
Person1: “What? That doesn't make sense. I put in a twenty and it gave me five cents. Well, after all it is a machine, it knows a lot more than me, so whatever.”(Slowly walks away looking at his change, then stops to watch another person walking up to the box.)
Person2: “Hmmm......I only have a dollar, but I'll give this thing a try.”(He inserts a dollar.)
Oh Box O' Change: “You have inserted one dollar, your change is twenty dollars.”
Person2: “Wow! Isn't that something? I don't go to work, but I get free money.”
Person1:(Seeing what happened,becomes enraged and walks up to person2)
Person2:(Standing as he happily counts his money.)
Person1: “How did you get twenty bucks? You only inserted a dollar. I inserted twenty bucks and that stupid change machine gave me a nickel. Hey that's my money that machine gave you . Give it to me!”(Reaches for the other persons money)
Person2:(He pulls his money from the other person's grasp) “Hey man, calm your horses. Listen you wanted change, right?”
Person1:(calms down and nods his head) “Yeah, I wanted change.”
Person2: “Well, guess what? You got change.”
Person1:(Walks away downhearted)
Person2: (Still happily counting his money) “I think I like change.”(Now in a jubilant mood smiles then walks away.)
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