Hello Melanie. Just re-visiting some of my earlier pieces and drawn back to your excellent poetry. I pray you continue to find openings for your writing.
For the last couple of years I have been more involved with Premier on-line community, originally joining to share poetry, but now I co-administer the Prayerwall. You are welcome to check out my page by googling Anne Linington Premier Community.
What a thought-provoking piece of poetry. You have managed to capture some profound thoughts in just a few short verses. Well-written and well-received.