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Can Somebody Do Something
by CELES MICKLE
04/04/09
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Can Somebody Do Something
Living in this society,
And everything is inequality,

Can Somebody Do Something
Coming to Church each,
And everyday;
Families don't even have
Anywhere to stay,

Can Somebody Do Something
For this world today
Keep it in your mind,
And don't delay,

Can Somebody Do Something
For the depressed,
The Lord is able to
Put them to rest,

Can Somebody Do Something
Many people have lost
Their homes,
Without God we're
Not alone,

Can Somebody Do Something
On our knees in Prayer,
Don't you even care,

Can Somebody Do Something
Without the Lord,
On our side
Get out of pride,

Can Somebody Do Something,


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Jacob Gibson 10 Apr 2009
Hello again Celes! Thank you for another good critique. Forgive me for critiquing your critiques, but they would be easier to read if they weren't all in capital letters. JUST A LITTLE TIP FOR THE FUTURE. :) Alrighty then... another beautiful poem full of truth and conviction. Very nice, I love it. No suggestions at the time. Look forward to reading more! God bless! (P.S. I have actually put ALL of my decent work on this website so you don't have to look anywhere else. ^_^)




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