Hello again Celes! Thank you for another good critique. Forgive me for critiquing your critiques, but they would be easier to read if they weren't all in capital letters. JUST A LITTLE TIP FOR THE FUTURE. :)
Alrighty then... another beautiful poem full of truth and conviction. Very nice, I love it. No suggestions at the time. Look forward to reading more! God bless! (P.S. I have actually put ALL of my decent work on this website so you don't have to look anywhere else. ^_^)