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Milk Replacer For Our Babes
by Patricia A Moore
02/25/09
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Milk Replacer for our Babes

Is this whatís in our churches today
Milk replacer to feed our babes
Is this what itís come down to
You replace God with a substitute
Feed them little sermonetts
And if there in trouble
A program theyíll get
Donít preach to long
Donít preach about hell
Preach a loving Gospel
And youíll do well
Take those altars way out back
Cause you donít have time for that
Got a get together
Right after church
Having dinner on the ground
Those women
Are the best cooks in town
Finish eating and off you go
Boy this traffic is moving slow
In a hurry, gotta get home
Missing that big game going on
Wow, just in time to see that play
Man that made the rest of your day
And you wonder whatís going on
Why their not that strong
Lets see what you fed them today
Milk replacer for our babes!

Patricia A Moore

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Kingdom Citizen 26 Feb 2009
A very good poem...written with passion and purpose. God bless you, my dear. Amen and thanks.
Deborah Ann Belka 25 Feb 2009
So, very true. I know God is all about love, but believe you and me, He also is about judgement. One day He will prove to the world He takes things very seriously, and He doesn't care who wins or loses a football game. He cares if Satin wins or loses souls. Sorry for rambling, but your poem hit on one of my hot buttons. Great Job!!!
Colin Moffett 25 Feb 2009
A powerful poem Patty!
Judy Wilson 25 Feb 2009
WOW, power packed article, good job !




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