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Her Heaven on Earth
by Teresa Lee Rainey
02/13/09
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From across the room, she stares. Does he notice her? He looks more handsome than she remembers.

From across the room, he searches the crowd. Their eyes meet. Does she know she’s gorgeous? She is an angel in white.

Tonight marks a year since Jack was sent overseas. Tonight’s banquet is a celebration of the company’s homecoming. For Jeff and Jill, it is so much more. They were married ten years ago, tonight.

She weaves her way through the crowd, unaware of her beauty. Her eyes are on her Prince Charming. Her auburn hair flows in soft waves to the small of her back. Each graceful step takes her closer to him. With one glance from him, she feels an emotion building that has been dormant for nearly a year. Excitement guides her toward his waiting arms.

He longs to hold her again. If God will grant him a Moses ability right now, he’ll part this human ocean. Loosing sight of her, he steps into the crowd, searching.

Frustration clouds her joy. She loses sight of her love. She stops in the center of an ocean of bodies. Helpless. Anxious. Tears threaten to fall from her emerald eyes. In desperation she prays, “Lord, where is he?”

Anticipation builds when he hears her prayer. To his amazement, the human sea parts. His bride stands alone. Beautiful. Is she crying? Two quick steps and he sweeps her into his arms. This is his heaven on earth.

This is her heaven on earth.

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