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by Nicole Ingwersen
12/13/03
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Look

Look.
At what i've done
At what i've said
This battle isn't won
Not by me, not by him
I just know
I can't let him win

Look.
Inside my heart
You'll see i'm sorry
I just hope you don't say goodbye
I hope we won't part

Look.
In my eyes
You'll see i'm sincere
But how can you believe
When to your eye, i've brought a tear

Look.
Upon the bridge we've made
Take pity on me please
For I put a crack in the cement I layed

Look.
To the Heaven's and ask yourself this
Was this the shot i've given her?
Oh please don't say i've missed

Look.
Even though your trust I shook
And the truth I took
Away. Take a peak into me
And look.

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Whitney Nemecek 30 Dec 2003
Wow...I really liked this poem. The message was great and I loved the way it flowed. Very neat. Keep writing! --Whitney




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