Hey Temetrie. Thank you for your funny critique. I ripped off the smurfs? Oh yeah... ha ha! I wasn't even thinking about that when I wrote this. I agree that Gregorian chant would make it even better. :) Maybe I should add that now.
Your poem is so beautiful. I like the variety of rhyme patterns, the rhymes themselves were good, and the message is very meaningful and wonderful. Praise Him for His unparralled gift! Do you speak a lot of Spanish by the way? God bless!