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Abundant Life in Christ
by Tim Pickl 
01/01/09
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Visual: Small sedan slides through snowy conditions on a highway at night.
Audio: Car radio: “…near blizzard conditions for the next several hours. If you don’t have to travel, please stay home.”


Visual: From the driver’s point-of-view looking out of the windshield, with heavy snow, revealed by the car’s headlights. Windshield wipers are running.
Audio: Mary’s voice: “Oh, shut up, I can drive if I want to.” Tom’s voice: “Look out!”


Visual: Semi-trailer truck appears in the car’s headlights—head on-- Mary turns the car hard-left.
Audio: Truck horn blaring


Visual: All-white screen
Audio: Crashing sound


Visual: Mary seated in a tavern, holding a drink to her head.
Audio: Mary, sobbing. “I’m so sorry Tom died.”


Visual: words on-screen appear: NO Jesus, NO peace.
Audio: Pastor’s voice: “No Jesus, no peace.”


Visual: words on-screen disappear. Fade to Mary, now seated in church, holding clasped hands to her head, in prayer.
Audio: Mary’s voice: “Thank You Lord for Your peace.”


Visual: words on-screen appear: KNOW Jesus, KNOW peace.
Audio: Pastor’s voice: “Know Jesus, know peace.”


Visual: words on-screen disappear. Lady raises her hands to the Lord, in sweet surrender.

Visual: words on screen appear: Abundant Life Church, Highway 18 and Sawyer Road, Oconomowoc. www.ALC1.org
Audio: Pastor’s voice, “Come to Abundant Life in Christ”






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Written December 20, 2008 A.D. for the
Mini-Challenge December 2008: 30 Second Commercial/Promo

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=349030




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